I am conducting this review to gain constructive feedback which i can use to improve and use to my advantage to produce a good coursework piece.So please give constructive feedbackthank you
Front Cover Review
1. What is your first impression of my Front Cover of a school magazine?
(eg. what grabs your attention? Colours, image and why?)
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2. What is your view on the mid-shot that fills the whole front cover does it serve it purpose? (Comment on the props used, location, costumes)
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3. Is the layout of the stories inside effective?
(Things to think about :-Does it act as a good basis for the images and wording? ,Does it hinder the photograph? ,Does it keep in with the theme of the magazine?)
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4. Do you think the mise-on-scene used on the magazine is effective and why or why not?
(Things to think about: - the colour scheme used, the photography used, The typeface used for mastheads and subtitles)
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5. If you would change anything about the front cover presented above what would you change and why?
(Comment on mise-on-scene – colour scheme, props used, location, type face etc.)
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Content Page Review
6. What is your first impression of my Content Page of a school magazine?
(eg. what grabs your attention? Colours, image and why?)
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7. What is your opinion on the layout of the content page?
(Things to think about? - The dividers used, colour scheme, background used, imagery used, type face)
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8.Does the magazines mise-on-scene etc. fit with the theme of the magazine and are the stories used relevant?
(Also comment way they have been presented, genre)
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9.Do you think the simplistic design is effective and different than the conventional school magazine if not why?
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10. Do you think the mise-on-scene used on the magazine is effective and why or why not?
(Things to think about: - the colour scheme used, the photography used, The typeface used for mastheads and subtitles)
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2 comments:
Anna Broomhead
1.The jigsaw puzzle pieces really catch your eye.
2.The shirts link to the sport element,and becuase they're smiling they look enthusiastic.
3.Hard to read from the print but they act as a newpaper cliping which gives the incling of new and explore different parts of the school aslso except sport.
4.The colour scheme fits in with the schoolcolours and the jigsaw pieces too.
5.I'd spread out the jigsaw pieces out over the page.I'd also make the models pose more in the middle.
6.They look mint!The text looks really professional.
7.It works really well and looks like a real newsletter.
8.Yeah,becuase the colour scheme and jigsaw pieces link with the cover.
9.Yes because it is easy to read.
10.The colour scheme works well as do the jigsaw pieces and the photos work nicely but the cover photo looks a bit orquard.
Viki Dempsey
1.The fact its for Biddulph high,bright in school colours the main image is big and relevent.
2.Yes it is relevent as the school is a sports colledge.
3.No but the text could be slightly bigger.
4.The typeface is good it looks like good fun,and appealing to read.The image have been well thought out with the appropiate props.
5.Nothing except the sub-headings being bigger.
6.All the image and use of colour i like the picture in the puzzle pieces too.
7.It is really clear and easy to read.
8.Yes defiantly as a school image and pictures are used frequently.I like the use of paper as the backgroundof the text.
9.I think it is quiet a conventional in layout but things added to it make it better and the use of imagery.
10.Yes becuase it suits,it's purpose not just that it does it in an intresting way.
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