Content Mock Up Two (using my own images)

From my research i had liked the content page which used an several images as the background and base of the spread.As you can see i then utilised the fact that the band was quiet high on the image this enabled me to get the most important aspect of the aim of the double page spread on and then gave me a lot of space bellow which i was able to use for text.The next steps where to :-

1.I added the page indicator at the top which is very stereotypical but very useful and is a quick indicator of the what the article or pages aim is.
2.I then added the text in different shaped boxes to not totally hinder the entire image and create a dive.But also to keep in with the indie theme and genre.
4.I then created a box like affect around coloured labels which are quotes which again fits with the indie theme this was also added by the large speech marks.
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Feedback Summary from , peer,teachers and my target audience:-

Disadvantages

1. The images are two large on the right hand side of the content page.
2. The pictures aren't compatible sizes and become destorted.
3. The 'indiesix' indicator in the right hand corner is out of proportion.
   
   

Advantages

1. The clever use of colour in the left hand side subsidises the white background and is the pineal of the indie theme (bright colours).
2. I like how suitable the divide is of a thin grey line down the side and this is aided by the images.
3. i like the use of the geometric shapes as they are unusual but aren't boring and serve their propose as a text basis and divider.
4. I also like the different colours used on labels as they are opposites but compliment each other very well.

Again i used the advise i was given and tried through out the 3 stages tried to implement things which would make the content more appropriate and appealing to my target audience, because they determine the success of your product and know what they desire for a effective magazine.