Content Mock up Version One (exsisting image)

This is a representation of what i aim to create for my final product using existing images and i hope you take on board what i am trying to create and give constructive criticism.
i was trying to create :-

1. A unique but effective content.
2. One that is uniform but challenges conventions
3. One that conveys the information and gets it across to the audience
4. A contents that is fitting for my target audience and genre.

Genral summary of feedback from peers
(Claire Robertson , Rachael Squires,Viki Dempsey , Emma Smith , Laura Ward,Tom Baddeley,Josh Whitehurst,Ben Dobson)

The advantages of this mock up :-

1. The box effect gives a uniformed effected which works well because there is a clear margin between the text and images.
2. The invisible banner around the title indiedom which does not hinder the images or text.
3. The Cartoon background gives a simple,but interesting background and lets the text act as labels.
4. The colours that correspond with text and numbers is a subconscious link.

Disadvantages

1. The font size is to big in some cases eg. the page numbers and too small in others such as the 'labels'.
2. To much colour in the images maybe some busy some simple.
3. Not enough pages to be a true representation.